Smoke and Scribbles

Damn these popups! DAMN THEM. SUP has approximately five seconds to apologize before I flounce. Disproving what I just said, have some original fiction I wrote for creative writing class. All of my unreliable narrators end up satirical, don't they? The assignment was just to have an unreliable narrator. 700 words, PG-13.

( Goodbye, Ricky Watson. )

So we had to write a satire for English class. This is mine. Uhh I have a day before I have to turn it in, so tell me what edits to make. I think that paragraphs four and five are kinda weak but I haven't the slightest idea as to what to do with 'em. The ending needs some work, too. There are a ton of italics and it's so annoying to edit them all in for LJ lol I'm just not going to do it. Imagine all the book titles are properly formatted, I'd really appreciate that.

Uhh what else? Oh, I'm pretty sure I'm doing the Dollhouse Summer Challenge. New fandoms are weird to get into and I am sort of hoping this will help me ~integrate~


Also, I am now making a concentrated effort to tag consistently. It will last for a week and then be over. Oh well. I might try to overhaul the tag system on my journal, but I am sooooooo lazy and the thing never deletes unused tags. Anyone know why that is? Should I just switch to cloud? ETA: NVM I GOT IT GUYS

( Satire )