Smoke and Scribbles

Damn these popups! DAMN THEM. SUP has approximately five seconds to apologize before I flounce. Disproving what I just said, have some original fiction I wrote for creative writing class. All of my unreliable narrators end up satirical, don't they? The assignment was just to have an unreliable narrator. 700 words, PG-13.

( Goodbye, Ricky Watson. )

These range from unfinished to really really unfinished and are of many fandoms and types! In two parts because of length.


( second time around )

( hell is empty and all the devils are here )

( long shadows )

( too late to turn back )

( I'll take my chances )

( dirty deeds done dirt cheap )

( I can see the flames from here )

( prickles at the back of your neck )

( there's a girl in there )

( the rat returns )

( back to school day )

( how we dance )

( vanishing cabinet )

( apologized all wrong )

( broken down )

( suffer in silence )

I wrote this for my Craft of Writing class. We had to write something taking place in a diner. It had to include a poet, mistletoe, a waltz, and obsession. LJ has just deleted this entry for the second time so this note is more terse than it otherwise would have been. PG for nonviolent, nondescriptive death. I'd appreciate comments/crit because I'm turning this in tomorrow.

( THE POET )

Title: Leak
Author: Smoke
Rating: PG-15 for swearing and nonexplicit sex.
A/N: I wrote this as a response to the BUCKETS AND BUCKETS OF RAIN WE'VE HAD. TAKE THAT, RAIN.

( Black Wind Blowing )

PG-13 for language and sexual references. Slash. Original work.

Wow this is like the longest oneshot of my life
Title: ( The Soft Beat )

My eyelids are swollen and allergic once more. I do not approve. Also, have a zombie excerpt. It won't be in the actual story because I wrote the climax/important decision the opposite way of how I planned to write it as an exercise. So this is like Bizarro-world Benny! Making the wrong choice. Warning: It squicked me, as I was writing it.

( it's a lot like -- )

Also, I promise to start writing fanfiction again and to not force you guys to read quite so much original fic anymore, haha.

So we had to write a satire for English class. This is mine. Uhh I have a day before I have to turn it in, so tell me what edits to make. I think that paragraphs four and five are kinda weak but I haven't the slightest idea as to what to do with 'em. The ending needs some work, too. There are a ton of italics and it's so annoying to edit them all in for LJ lol I'm just not going to do it. Imagine all the book titles are properly formatted, I'd really appreciate that.

Uhh what else? Oh, I'm pretty sure I'm doing the Dollhouse Summer Challenge. New fandoms are weird to get into and I am sort of hoping this will help me ~integrate~


Also, I am now making a concentrated effort to tag consistently. It will last for a week and then be over. Oh well. I might try to overhaul the tag system on my journal, but I am sooooooo lazy and the thing never deletes unused tags. Anyone know why that is? Should I just switch to cloud? ETA: NVM I GOT IT GUYS

( Satire )

Instead of writing another chapter, I wrote... Uhh... This. It's not porn.

Title: Hair Dye
Author: Smoke
Rating: Uh. PG-13 if you have no imagination, R otherwise.
Original characters. Ask for permission before using.
( Lisa holds up one hand and looks at her fingertips critically. They are red, and she does not see the appeal. )

For Iambic, some femmeslash I wrote during my math class. Con and Anne make their inevitable reappearance. Rated maybe PG-15 for some seriously fun implications. Con and Anne are on their way to a party, which Constance is going to fake her way into. She's wearing a fancy dress for this reason. They're in a coach on the way there when this begins.

( Hey hey you you I wanna be your girlfriend )


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And because I'm a bit bored and I did this prompt, I'll open end-of-the-school-year prompts a week early. GO FOR IT GUYS.